Bamboo
4 years ago
Monday, November 17, 2008
this is version 2 of ma previous poem.this deals with what we think of love and commitment
WE SAY "YES I DO"
we want to be what we really are
we are sick of shyness,tired of restraint;
we dont wish to be just another face in the crowd
we ant to break dogma,and speak our mind.
we shall not lock our love in the dungeons of the heart
we will let it flow free engulfing our very soul.
we dont fear commitments, nor care for reproach.
we have the courage to speak up
and let our feelings be known
to walk up the aisle hand in hand
and boldly say"unto death do we part"
meaning it in the deepest sense of the words
where souls unite and identities merge
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4 comments:
It would be nice if you could change the color as well as lower the font size. It's hard for me to read your posts. Thanks.
well I'll try the next time but i assign colours to the posts depending on the mood or feel of the posts.yeah ill lower font size for sure.
hey, ths is ur cousin madhuvanti frm chennai. u hav an amazin writin style. keep up the gr8 work. lookin forward to readin more of ur stuff.
a little too idealistic lol, but still very feelgood.. WHY didn't i read your blog before?!
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