ive always thought poems are built on emotions.ive seen ones on love,friendship,trust,sadness,etc.all serious emotions ;nothing to tickle your funny bone.i had a thought: why not write a funny poem.so here goes.
my god ,you must see her
the lady with nicknames galore
any name suits her just fine
irritating her to the core
tell her this and she blows steam
13 year old kiddo, cat with cream
call her a bug
and she wont reply
ive never bothered
to ask her why
call her a bug
and she pucks up her nose
the yelling gathers steam
what a tantrum she throws!
i call her a buggy now
yet,no reaction ,not a response
i say:
"ive added an extra y
aso now you gotta reply"
she retorts:
"damn you for this and damn you for that
you irritating little rat!"
"so i get a name now?"
sarcasm oozing in my tone.
"yeah you do
and suits you too"
and so we stand now
a rat and a bug
the argument resolved
and problem solved!"
Bamboo
4 years ago
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4 comments:
i hate it....
expected u to!!:D
I chose the funny option down below... but I still do believe there's more to the poem than it's obvious funny outlook... 'll read it again when I've more time on hand...
am I right btw? loved the piece...
did you notice the first comment on this one??that should give you an idea.it was meant to irritate:P
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